Sela Locke

Well. Yeah. My name's Sela and I will be your reviewer for...well, I'd say today but you'll probably get other reviewers so--I'll be your reviewer for 12:30 this Saturday afternoon ...

Good morning! I'm Sela, and I shall be your reviewer today. First off, I would like to say this was a sweet love story, despite the tragic ending. The image ...

Hi, I'm Sela! I don't nitpick, and I don't have loads to say, but let's see if I can help you out with this. It was sweet--really sweet, actually. The ...

I can see most of the nitpicks have been taken care of, and since your grammar is nearly impeccable, I've nothing to say on that front. I can't believe you ...

Okay. Is this a fanfiction for the Percy Jackson series, or did you want to start your own version? If it's the former, ask a mod to move this to ...

I liked it, really, I did. The only thing that honestly bothered me--er, the two things, that is, were the dialogue, and the description of the guy. Let's start with ...

It was very...real. That's what I liked about it most. How, even though the wording wasn't always elegant (and good, because it seems to me she's something of a practical ...

I don't know where you're getting your statistics. This isn't a personal affront or anything like that--but this was terrible . I mean, you switched tenses, you used 'poignant' and ...

I don't have a lot of time, so let's just get this over with, shall we? I'm not going to nitpick, though for a fourteen-year-old your grammar/spelling wasn't bad at ...

Yay! I'm going to do a really big review for you! Dance for joy--I rarely do such things anymore. Got too much else t'do. You're getting a Sela-Attack. ;-D I ...

Ahh, well. I did , I admit, like part of the description here. It's real, it seems as though perhaps you've had a real-life experience along these lines, yes? Either ...

As a skeleton, a simple plot line, it was nice. However, I think you had a little trouble putting your thoughts down on the page--there were oodles and oodles of ...

Dang, where to start... You need to work on your punctuation and grammar, first. You hardly ever put question marks in where they should be, you mix up there/their/they're, and ...

Okay, so I'm trying to be very honest, right? And this is what happens. I've read the majority of this story. The characters are, for the most part, normal. Ridiculously, ...

The other guys got the nitpicks, so I'm just here to say What the heck was that? The funny thing is, I've done almost this exact same thing myself. A ...